Just editing and revising “: follow the comments.
the paper is engineering economic paper. undergradaute level
My paper is about comparison between the use of chlorine disinfection and Ultraviolet disinfection in water treatment plant. In the paper I try to prove that chlorine is better disinfection than Ultraviolet. I have my paper back with all comments on it.
The comments in black are about writing merit and the comments in red is about writing content. The topic is easy and there are a lot of information about it.
I don’t need major changes in my paper just correct the mistakes and adjust what needed. There is key error page at the beginning to help you understand the comments in black(for example C state for comma and etc…)
Try also to follow the comments on red as well, the comments on red is about the writing content. Try to adjust what’s needed add or delete if necessary but don’t come up with something that is totally different from the paper.
You may need to go back to some of the links in the reference page and read so you better explain what’s already been written.
all i need is to make my paper better in writing contetn and writing merit.
I will post word file of my paper and pdf file of the comments.